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REDGEAR S2: Ep 1 P2Prolugue two: an escape through the EclipseREDGEAR S2: Ep 1 P2
"Alright this must be it" she said pressing 57 again and it moved up, this time they seemes use to it but still felt the impact on the weight.
"hehehe. I'm actually surprized that I'm more or less used to this." Tiff said.
Suddenly it stoppped and opened the doors, we walked out and looked around seeing it was a giant dome area.... it was very cold, so cold yo were you could see your own breath, and the ground felt hard but flat to the point you think your walking on ice, and i could see nothing but the little light the staff provided.
by *lewisvel1
REDGEAR S2: Ep 1Long ago before the time that technology existed, across from the year 1183 their was an apocalypse between man.... and what is believed to be machine, the humans were put under slaves at the time, but only into a country which is the land mark of America today. Their source of power was also known to be special artifacts with Great power, said to have come from the gods themselves and are thousands of year more advance than even Today's time.REDGEAR S2: Ep 1
The machines were capable of using this magic and actually figure how to acquire their own cheap weaponry.....so far its making our lives are dying.... we all thought it was too much, maki
by *lewisvel1
Ralis's Profile V2Height- 5'8Ralis's Profile V2
Weight- 154
Age- 16
Hair- white (slightly silver)
Eyes- Red (turns purple when in combat)
Skin- White
Born- (Activated) May 23, 2248 Gespie Island, Florida
Product number- PT-7081
Blood Type- Genetically enhanced O Negative
Clothing often wears: Blue Jeans with black running shoes, wears white T-shirt, and a red Jacket that says RA-12 on the back, always zipped open. When at school he wears a black backpack that has an X in the middle
Was created by Dr.Gerald who made Ralis the worlds greatest de
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REDGEAR EP9 end of bookRalis took off at the door leading to his room as it was locked. He tries to opening it... but couldn't figure it out... I stated to hit it then kick it... then I ran back and rammed it....”gaa.....ow” He said moving back rubbing my shoulder.REDGEAR EP9 end of book
“having trouble I see” He turns his head and it was Dave laughing at me.
“yeah cant open this damn door” said Ralis kicking it again.
“hey hey hey now, look all you have to do is this” he places his palm against the door and it glowed disappearing, then Dave walked through. “and thats it, have you ever used pal
by *lewisvel1
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| My full name is Lewis J. Velarde, i am now graduating from MkGavock High. I love to write about anything (when i have the free time or when i just feel like it) a bit weak in drawing, but then again you can just bit me if you try to get in my way (seriously) I joined Deviant art to understand how other do their art and stories and to gain ideas on my own stories. also i have join to make new freinds from around the world and to have fun.... |
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I have manny shatter memories... but the ones i have are great memories to fold.
Vex- [link]
Amilia- [link]
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My Twin Bro. --> [link] | My lil Sis--> [link] | My Comic Page --> [link]
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Messenger of the Night.
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A soon to be illustrator with the help of everyone. So comment on my art and give me advice, so I may become better before I finally go to college. [link]
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I have manny shatter memories... but the ones i have are great memories to fold.
Vex- [link]
Amilia- [link]
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Messenger of the Night.
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A soon to be illustrator with the help of everyone. So comment on my art and give me advice, so I may become better before I finally go to college. [link]
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I have manny shatter memories... but the ones i have are great memories to fold.
Vex- [link]
Amilia- [link]
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Messenger of the Night.
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A soon to be illustrator with the help of everyone. So comment on my art and give me advice, so I may become better before I finally go to college. [link]
Most appreciated
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latest scientific studies indicate that living is bad for you.
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I have manny shatter memories... but the ones i have are great memories to fold.
Vex- [link]
Amilia- [link]
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Messenger of the Night.
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A soon to be illustrator with the help of everyone. So comment on my art and give me advice, so I may become better before I finally go to college. [link]
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I have manny shatter memories... but the ones i have are great memories to fold.
Vex- [link]
Amilia- [link]
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Messenger of the Night.
.....................................
A soon to be illustrator with the help of everyone. So comment on my art and give me advice, so I may become better before I finally go to college. [link]
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I have manny shatter memories... but the ones i have are great memories to fold.
Vex- [link]
Amilia- [link]
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I have manny shatter memories... but the ones i have are great memories to fold.
Vex- [link]
Amilia- [link]
^^ *glomps you* i missed you sooo much.
i had a letter i was going to send but i wanted to draw you a picture to send with it...but its to late now..
im sorry
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I have manny shatter memories... but the ones i have are great memories to fold.
Vex- [link]
Amilia- [link]
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